Dying/broken/forgiven.... now I begin

Born: 17-06-56....gemini.... monkey
re-born: 3-09-80
born again\found: 14-04-08
other notable dates: 10-03-68; 03-09-87; 23-03-96;
1-05-98; 31-01-02; 5-04-04

Interests: movement, stressed/transgressive embodiment, lived experience (body\space\time\relation)
expression ( word, dance, text, image, story, music, poetics)
learning, yielding......

Hopes for the blog:
offer up the wild intersectedness of lived experience and engage others in creative, expressive, perhaps irreverant, hopefully playful, and respectful encounters....
enact kindness
create moments of pause for disclosure, discovery, stillness

Wednesday, March 2, 2011

8 over 6... another go at it


The day that came broke dawn in half
crawled over glass and cried
its red rough heart had lost its laugh
the exacted price for pride
then leaning on its twisted staff
relieved it hadn't died
that day grew soft for cow and calf
a generous countryside
tomorrow's open wide
 


6 comments:

  1. It appears to me as if you are talking a turnng point, a change in someones fundamental understanding.

    I like it, very nice rhythm, good flow and GREAT imagery.

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  2. I love this, you. I love her flow....like a cricket ball flying through the air.It's the image I got in my mind's eye, whilst reading her.

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  3. OOOhhh. (((Harlequin))) This is very high end. I am moved and heartened.

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  4. wm-- thanks so much; i was hoping the images would find their way through.... but ya never know!!
    SarahA-- many thanks, you. the ball flying through the air will be an image that i will likely carry with me into future expressive creations!!
    christopher-- much appreciated; "moved" is a compliment indeed!!

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  5. I must admit: the fledgling left me puzzled. This one leaves me enthralled. Wonderful and upliftingly twisty.

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  6. pisces-- thanks for the comment and your usual wonderful candor.... i love it. i must admit: the ambiguity riddled throughout the fledgling was likely an expression of my own black mood during its writing... that's a good thing, too, sometimes.

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